I used to be an animator like you
But then I took an arrow to the knee!!
A year and a half?
Decent animation. Terrible choice of music.
Wow! I thought this was on a loop or something! Was not expecting him to pull out that cat launcher!
I'm not really into poetry but I loved that poem. It was simple and poignant.
I think the music and animation complimented it nicely.
I gave this a 4 because the artwork just needs a better finish to it.
I know you were going for that simple style but I think it needs to be cleaned up a bit somehow.
Thank you for the review. I do admit I felt that I rushed it a bit when it came to the quality of the art. Patience and time is something I'll plan to include on my next animation. Glad you liked the poem :D thanks again for checking my animation out.
Stolen rip-off. Terrible.
You need to invent your own characters and develop your own unique style.
You say you're doing this to express yourself but it's not self expression when it's derivative of someone else's work.
This is precisely David Firth's style which you've just taken and then you didn't even do a good job of it.
Also, try to be less obnoxious and annoying towards voters.
You've pre-emptively called their negative comments stupid. So that means you've already decided you're not going to listen to any criticism.
You've got a lot of growing up to do and your talents are in much need of development.
Excellent style and artwork. Clearly lots of hard work put in, funny and on top of all that - strange! That's a 10 from me, my friend!
Excellent! I lol'd! Moar please!
Love it! Animation, style, design, music - all exceptional!
A 10 for artistic integrity!
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